100 WC week #3 The Most Crazy Field Trip
The Most Crazy Field Trip
Professor Gorden always takes us on the weirdest field trips. Today we are going to a swamp. Right when we got there we were told to look at the picture of the crocodile on the bus. At first it looked normal but then it twisted into looking like different animals. "Thats weird!" cried Jade.
We were told to look at the swamp. The swamp mysteriously turned purple. My mind swirled and it was difficult to focus. We went to the bus and continued down the swamp that is all I remember. which is weird because that is all everyone else remembers.
Great use of the prompt words and very creative original story. I can tell you have taken time to read over your work.
ReplyDeleteTwo things 1) last sentence needs to start with a period or the period needs to be a comma, 2) I am confused about we went to the bus and continued down the swamp. (Did you get back on the bus? Did you go into the swamp? or what do you mean by down the swamp?)